[pnpgm] Game Update #29 - File #91 - Investigation Ends

[Chris & Karen Wells]

Sorry, I would like to amend my post...it's a little too bloodthirsty for
Ben'Dar.  :-)

I'd like to change his interaction with Jensen as follows:

 "Later, when Jensen addresses him, Ben'Dar ignores his words, but just
glares at him with a blank look on his face, his ruddy face dark with
impatience and irritation.  He gives no response nor any sign that he has
understood Jensen's speech."



On 3/12/08, Chris & Karen Wells <ckwells at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Ben'Dar replies to the gaurd in a low voice, not wanting Jensen to know he
> can speak Marentian, "I train the finest horses in the Lands.  Dragon Tooth
> Steeds is located near Maren city.  I obtain only the best horses available,
> and train them to be superior riding or war mounts.  The ranch is still
> young, but it will soon be known throughout the Lands for my horses, which
> will have no equals."
>
> He grins at the gaurd's comment on him being a 'wacko'.  "No, not a wacko,
> I was just having a little fun."  He grows serious, "But I did not like his
> threat on my horse.  What kind of man kills another man's horse for no
> reason?  Where I come from, such a man would not live long."
>
> *****
>
> Later, Ben'Dar snorts his disbelief at Kaylle's words about magic users
> treating warriors as property.  Such a backward land could not possibly
> exist!
>
> *****
>
> Later, when Jensen addresses him, Ben'Dar ignores his words, but just
> glares at him, his ruddy face dark with anger.  Yes, he decides, this man
> deserves death.  But now is not the time.  He smiles savagely at the man,
> savoring his future revenge.  When the man finishes his inconsequential
> words, Ben'Dar, still smiling, says in Zen'Dali, "Pain will drown you when
> your death comes at my hand."
>
> *****
>
> Later, when the gaurd returns for his drink, Ben'Dar smiles at him and
> introduces himself.  "I am Ben'Dar, warrior of the Fel'oros People."
> Ben'Dar will give him directions to his ranch as well as the name of the
> steward.  He will spend a few minutes chatting with the man about his rough
> upbringing among the Zen'Da, and find out a bit about the man's past on his
> family's ranch and the decisions that brought him into the town gaurd.
>
> *****
>
> OOC:  Recap section?
>
> OOC:  Ben'Dar is content for now to merely pass along the info that one of
> the gaurds may have a questionable background.  The Steward has authority to
> hire/fire as needed in Ben'Dar's absence.
>
-------------- next part --------------
An HTML attachment was scrubbed...
URL: <http://www.powersandperils.org/pipermail/pnpgm/attachments/20080313/4644fb53/attachment.htm>